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Part 1

Samuel Ortega's heart broke when he opened the door to room 218 of San Gabriel Hospital and saw his wife trying to cover his mother's face with a pillow.

The cup of coffee he was carrying fell to the floor and shattered against the white tiles. The dark liquid spread like a bitter stain next to his shoes, but he didn't hear the crash. He only heard the muffled groan of Doña Teresa, his mother, and the desperate rubbing of her fingers against the sheet.

—Valeria! What are you doing?

Valeria turned around abruptly. Her eyes were wide open, her mouth trembling, and she was still clutching the pillow in her hands. For a second, she didn't look like a surprised woman, but rather someone furious at having been interrupted.

Samuel lunged at the bed and snatched the pillow away. Doña Teresa gasped for air with a broken sound, as if her chest were splitting from the inside. Her face was pale, wet with sweat, and her eyes searched for her son with a terror he had never seen in her before.

—Mom, I'm here. I'm here.

Valeria dropped the pillow to one side and began to speak too fast.

"It's not what you think, Samuel. Your mother was drowning. She panicked. I just wanted to help her."

But nothing in that room seemed helpful. The oxygen mask was crooked. The monitor beeped irregularly. Doña Teresa's hand trembled, clutching Samuel's shirt, as if letting go would mean being alone with him again.

"Help her?" he asked, his voice breaking. "By pressing a pillow to her face?"

Valeria put a hand to her chest.

—You're in shock. You're dressed badly. You know how your mom is, she always exaggerates, she always wants to make me look like the bad guy.

That phrase opened a wound in Samuel that was deeper than the scene itself. Because it wasn't the first time Valeria had spoken about Doña Teresa like that. It wasn't the first time she had accused her of manipulating, interfering, and humiliating her with her help.

Doña Teresa had raised Samuel alone in a tenement in the Obrera neighborhood of Mexico City, after her husband died in a minibus accident when Samuel was 7 years old. She sold tamales in the early morning, washed other people's clothes in the afternoons, and still found the strength to sit in school meetings with her hair neatly combed and a tired smile, as if poverty were something that could be hidden with dignity.

Years later, when Samuel opened a small printing shop in Iztapalapa and the business began to fail due to debt, he and Valeria had no choice but to move into Doña Teresa's house in Coyoacán. Samuel promised it would be temporary. Doña Teresa opened the door without question, made them chicken soup, and cleaned the guest room as if receiving them was a joy, not a burden.

Valeria never forgave him for it.

It bothered her that the house wasn't hers. It bothered her that Doña Teresa made tortillas by hand. It bothered her that she asked if the electricity bill had been paid yet. It bothered her to depend on an older woman who, according to her, "lived as if she were still in the old days."

The arguments started over small things: a pot out of place, an overdue bill, a comment at a family meal. Then they turned more vicious.

—Your mom enjoys seeing me down.

—My mom is helping us.

—No, Samuel. She's reminding you that without her you are nothing.

He thought it was wounded pride. He thought Valeria was frustrated by the bankruptcy, by the payments, by the life they hadn't achieved. He thought marriage also meant enduring dark times.

But while he worked long hours to build up the printing press, Doña Teresa began to fade. She ate less. She slept poorly. She said she felt dizzy. One afternoon she collapsed in the patio while watering her pots of basil and bougainvillea. The doctor spoke of high blood pressure, stress, and exhaustion. No one mentioned fear.

Now, in room 218, Samuel understood that the danger had not yet reached the hospital.

He had been sitting at his table.

I had slept under the same roof.

She had smiled in the family photos.

Samuel pressed the emergency button until it almost broke. Two nurses rushed in. One adjusted Doña Teresa's oxygen mask. The other took Valeria aside and asked her to leave.

"I am his daughter-in-law," Valeria claimed. "I have a right to be here."

Doña Teresa, her voice barely alive, whispered something that froze Samuel's blood.

—Don't let her get close.

The nurse looked at Samuel. He felt the entire hospital fall silent.

—Sir, what happened here?

Samuel swallowed. He looked at his wife. He looked at his mother. And for the first time in months, he chose not to cover up the truth in shame.

—My wife was suffocating my mother.

Valeria let out a dry, theatrical, almost perfect cry.

"He's lying! His mother turned him against me!"

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But Doña Teresa squeezed her son's hand with a strength impossible for someone so weak. Then she looked up at him and said something that changed everything:

—Samuel… check the blue notebook on my desk… before she makes it disappear.

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